Does This Part Of My Story Sound Alright?

Its a romance story that’s based in the 1800′s. The girl is traumatized because of a horrible event that occurred a year before. I would really like criticism and opinions! (: Thanks.
Saundra awoke screaming loudly. She stopped the scream midway through because she realized it was all just a nightmare, none of those men where really there, nobody was hurting her with knifes, she was perfectly fine, but she still had to rub her body to reassure herself anyway. Reality and nightmares were not so very different to her. Taking deep breaths she got out of bed, her hair was a mess, and her nightgown was also ruffled in the moon light, but she decided to walk down to the kitchen and grab a snack, maybe chocolate cake was leftover from desert, she hoped so, she had always had a weakness when it came to chocolate. She quietly opened the door, desperately praying nobody had awoken from her frantic and ridiculous screaming. Slowly and carefully she walked down the moon lite spiral staircase, until she finally reached the kitchen. She looked around until found her motivation. Aha! She grabbed a piece of chocolate cake and made her way back up to her bedchamber. Finally, her mind had relaxed as it focused on the sweet, tangy, taste of the chocolate. And when she had finished it she hoped into her bed without any hesitation, because frankly, she was tired, and fell asleep quickly without noticing anything she felt. Thank god for chocolate cake.
The next morning Anthony woke up at the sound of knocking at his door. He got up and went to the door and cracked it slightly open, so he could glare at his butler.
“My lord, you requested that I wake you at a quarter to ten,” said his butler, Chives with a smug look on his wrinkled face.
Why had he done that again? Damnation! He had to go train Saundra. Running his hair he answered Chives,
“Thank you, you may go now.” And he closed the door.